Talk:The Paper

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Minor with the introductory statement.

It would be better to turn this into a table instead of using block quotes. Before hand, it was compressed into a hard to read jar of text... now it's too large and expanded...

I'm going to see about getting that table set up.

There we go! It feels nicely formatted now. Things are grouped together, redundant words are removed, expanded the "X" to let it have a "natural" feel. and locations now reflect what it would appear as (xx:yy)